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Sunday, November 22, 2009

Assignment 1


This is the topic to be discussed for this week.

Some people believe that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university. Do you agree with the statement? Please give your reasons in the form of a thesis statement. A parallel thesis statement, that is. I shall expect you to submit the assignment in the comment box by Thursday 26th November, 2009 by 10.00 P.M.



SOMETHING TO PONDER

"It is easier to be wise for others than for ourselves."

Francois De La Rochefoucauld



50 comments:

Anonymous said...

According to some people, study abroad can give us a lot of benefits. I totally agree that study abroad will give us a lot of benefits in terms of experience, responsibilities, knowledge

-wan nabila-
-group 5-

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to the undergraduate students compared to study in local university because the students can gain more experiences, get different way of teaching and learning process and master another languages.

siti rahmah isa
group 5

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because the students can get more experiences,adapt in different environments and have a lots of facilities.

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because the students can get more experiences,have different environment and have a lots of facilities.

-nurul husna bt abdul mutalib-
-group 5-

Teacher said...

Wan Nabila, Wan Nabila, Congratulation for being the first to submit your assignment! Good job girl. However,do you think there is something missing from the thesis statement?

Siti Rahmah, maybe you can enlighten us what kind of experiences that one can get when studying overseas that he or she cannot get when studying locally.

Anonymous: I need your name and group.

Nurul Husna, what facilities do they get from a university overseas that is lacking here?

Others: Please, do not wait till the last minute to submit your work. To those who have submitted, you are encouraged to ask questions or raise issues with others' opinions and ideas. This activity should be helping you all to be more critical.

Anonymous said...

It is totally agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because it gains the personality of the students,helps in finding jobs, and improves the language fluency.

-Ummi Maryam Bt Djusman, G5

Tg. Nurnadzatul Atikah bt Tg. Yakob , G5 said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to the undergraduate students compared to studying in local universities and this can be further explained in terms of personal,intercultural, and career development.

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to the undergraduate students compared to studying in local universities and this can be further explained in terms of personal, intercultural, and career development.

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed by studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because it can be explained in terms of to gain more experiences, to improve the language as well and to achieve high of education level.

- Zaimislawayu
- group 15

Anonymous said...

Most of the students have a chance to further their studies in abroad,they are strongly advised to take this opportunity.Thus,that is no doubt that studying abroad promises more advantages to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because the students can build self-motivation,achieve more knowledge,and get high level of education.

Anonymous said...

Most of the students have a chance to further their studies in abroad,they are strongly advised to take this opportunity.Thus,that is no doubt that studying abroad promises more advantages to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because the students can build self-motivation,achieve more knowledge,and get high level of education. -NOOR DIANA BT SHARUDIN-GP 15-

Anonymous said...

It is strongly supported that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university and it can be described in terms of experience, knowledge and self-confidence.

nik fadhilah
group 15

Anonymous said...

Most of the students have a chance to further their studies in abroad,but they did not go.However studying abroad promises more advantages to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because the students can easily get a job,gain more knowledge and learn the cultures of others.

Anonymous said...

Most of the students have a chance to further their studies in abroad,but they did not go.However studying abroad promises more advantages to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because the students can easily get a job,gain more knowledge and learn the cultures of others.

ahmad
g15

syida, G15 said...

It is stongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university since the standard of education is in higher level, an exposure of different cultures and an experiences of being independent in foreign country.

Anonymous said...

It is agreed that undergraduate students would benefit a lot by studying abroad. This can be best explained in terms of knowledge, experience and maturity.

Norsyahira Norjimi
Group 15

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying overseas can give benefits to undergraduate students as they will be exposed to a more condusive learning environment, they will learn to perform their studies better and they will gain valuable experiences rather than studying locally.

Shamsal Ezani
Group 15

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying overseas can give benefits to undergraduate students as they will be exposed to a more condusive learning environment, they will learn to perform their studies better and they will gain valuable experiences rather than studying locally.

Shamsal Ezani
Group 15

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying overseas can give benefits to undergraduate students as they will be exposed to a more condusive learning environment, they will learn to perform their studies better and they will gain valuable experiences rather than studying locally.

Shamsal Ezani
Group 15

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying overseas can give benefits to undergraduate students as they will be exposed to a more condusive learning environment, they will learn to perform their studies better and they will gain valuable experiences rather than studying locally.

Shamsal Ezani
Group 15

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying overseas can give benefits to undergraduate students as they will be exposed to a more condusive learning environment, they will learn to perform their studies better and they will gain valuable experiences rather than studying locally.

Shamsal Ezani
Group 15

Anonymous said...

It is agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to unedrgraduate students compared to studying in local university because it helps them to get jobs easily, to improve languages proficiency, and to know other race's culture.


shazwani muhd subian
group 5

Anonymous said...

It is agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to unedrgraduate students compared to studying in local university because it helps them to get jobs easily, to improve languages proficiency, and to know other race's culture.


shazwani muhd subian
group 5

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university in terms of experience in new place,education level and independence life.

Mohd Hafidz
Group 15=P

Anonymous said...

So it is solemnly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university and this can elaborated in terms of experience, lifestyle and education.

saifuddin
group 15
=)

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefit for undergraduate students compared to studying in local university and this can be further explained in terms of experience,knowledge and independence

~Wahidah G5~

Anonymous said...

It is totally agreed that studying abroad is better than studying in local universities because will be exposed to new environment,live on their own and learn new culture.

alif.
g15

wan nor aqilah said...

it is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university as it helps them to learn the cultures of others, to improve their language proficiency and to get freedom.

^wan nor aqilah, g5^

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings plenty of benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because it helps to widen the student's horizon, improve the competency to speak other languages and explore new cultures.

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings plenty of benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because it helps to widen the student's horizon, improve the competency to speak other languages and explore new cultures.


rafiqree g15

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings plenty of benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because it exposes to a better learning environment, learns to perform works better and gains a lot of experience.

nabilah,G5

Anonymous said...

It is solemnly disagreed that studying abroad brings more advantages to undergraduates students compared to studying in local university in terms of social,financial and cultural

aisyah idris
group 15

Teacher said...

Ummi, how does studying overseas helps in improving one's language?

Nadzatul, graduates who studied locally are also well-demanded by the local market because they have been trained for the specific skills needed by the local companies or organizations.

Zaimislawayu, I need you to rewrite the thesis statement to make it more parallel.No harm in sending one more?

Noor Diana, universities in Malaysia have so much to offer. Are we saying that 'high level of education cannot be achieved' in Malaysia?

Anonymous said...

i know mdm..my mistake is i left the alphabet 'd' for agree..that mean i should correct it to agreed..
is it i'm right??
-wan nabila-
-group 5-

Anonymous said...

It is solemnly agreed that studying abroad gives more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university and this can be explained in from the aspects of gaining experience, inspiring self-motivation and broadening job opportunity.

~fathihah~
group 15

miSs_T said...

It is agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university due to responsibility , proficiency in English language and experience.


>fatin athira<
group 5
:D

Anonymous said...

Mdm i should correct my mistake by more specific about gain experience.
How about "meet amazing people" ?

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefit to undergraduate students compared to study in local university because the students can meet amazing people, get different way of teaching and learning process and master another languages.

siti rahmah isa
group 5

siti nur 'aqilah said...

slm...

It is strongly disagreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university, and this can be futher explained in terms of socialism, patriotism and finance.


>siti nur'aqilah<
>g 5<

Anonymous said...

With the rapid development of global economies, many companies want to hire the employees that have a degree or master from foreign universities because in global market, it is more competitive. From that, it is agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate than to studying in local universities that can be discussed in terms of career path, self- confidence and experience of the students.
Wan Noorul-Faizah Mohamed Amin G5

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefit to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university and this can be best explained in knowledge,environment and culture.

tasha g15

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university and this can be explained due to gain their experience,improve their language and learn something new about their culture.

zubeir-group 5

[g]adis[a]kustik said...

studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying in local university because they can learn to manage their life independently,study with a well-known lecturers and study with a conducive environment with a lot of useful facilities.

p/s:sorry madam..i forgot to view this blog and unintentionally late to submit this assignment.hope u still can accept mine.;p

Anonymous said...

Actually, studying abroad indeed benefits the students as they can gain extra knowledge, learn other culture and have many job opportunities.

Noor Hafiza Zainal
Group 15

Teacher said...

Dear students, sorry for the delay in responding to your thesis statement.

Nicky, is the knowledge gained in Malaysia any different from knowledge gained from abroad universities? For example, is learning sociology different if learned from two different continents?


Ahmad, is it a generalization or is it for a fact overseas' graduates can get jobs easier compared to local graduates?


Syida, np.


Norsyahira, a thesis statement is supposed to be written in a sentence. A combination of your stand and the three main points.


Shamsal, it is rather long since you wrote your thesis statement in clauses. Can it be rewritten in a simpler way? Remember, word limit is only 450.


Shazwani, how does learning other races' culture benefit the students?


Hafidz, shouldn't it be written this way if you want to write your thesis statement in terms? Your stand..."and this can be best explained in terms of"(your points).


Saifuddin, a good one.

Teacher said...

Wahidah, can't wait to read the rest of the essay.


Alif, what or who will be exposed to new environment?


W.N. Aqilah, Wow! Freedom? In what sense?


Nabilah, it exposes what or who to a better learning environment and what learning environment you have in mind here?


Aisyah, you are the first to disagree with the topic. Remember that when you want to write in "terms of" you have to write "and this can be further discussed in terms of..."


Wan Nabila, we are born to make mistake and correct the mistake... I believe it is just a typo error, right?


Fatihah, broadening job opportunity? How can that happen?

Miss _T, due to? Proficiency in English Language? Are we required to be proficient in English if we were to study in the University Al-Azhar or any other universities in other parts of the world that do not use English as the medium of communication?


Siti Rahmah, how amazing can people be?


Siti Nur'aqilah, is your thesis statement parallel?

W.N.Faizah, can't universities in Malaysia help to instill self-confidence in the students?\


Tasha, what is missing in your thesis statement?


Zubeir, how are you going to explain your second main point?


N. Hafiza, let's avoid ourselves from using "actually". It sounds less formal, don't you think?


Gadis Akustik... errrr I need your real name. By the way, studying with well-known lecturers? hmmm how can this be elaborated? I am excited to know the supporting details..:)

Anonymous said...

when the students studying abroad,they will exposed with another language. They will be fluent by the language when they find themselves in a world where everyone speaks another language. So,it is the great opportunity for them to improve their language skills.

ummi maryam, group 5

Teacher said...

Good point Ummi. :)

Anonymous said...

It is strongly agreed that studying abroad can give more benefit to undergraduate students compared to local university because they can learn new culture of other countries,face with numerous new experience and teach them to become independent.

Amier
Group 15

Anonymous said...

So, it is strongly agreed that studying abroad brings more benefits to undergraduate students compared to studying locally because they can gain more experience, get a better job and be independence.

fatin multazimah
g 15

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